2-43th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
To tell the truth is important in order to maintain the society. That is a very basic action and behavior. Although we always have to act and tell truly, sometimes we need tricky things to maintain a relationship and a society. However, in the official behavior, it must be true. If you don't keep this, it would be very serious. Nobody believe the government. At last, the society would be collapsed since there are no faith. In the relationship between persons, if there are no faith, the relationship would be no longer. But there are exceptions. That is a good lie. There are not only one answer in the world. If you want to seek something, there would be many paths to go on. Though the true is only one, when we use as a tool that make the relationship be more soft, the lie is helpful, for example, in lovers. It would make the mood be more softly. Basically, to pursue the true is very important. If you cheat someone once, you would want to do once more.To tell a lie or a true is a custom.
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Hi, [이름]!
It\'s Tuesday today but I want to say \"Happy Friday!\" because tomorrow is a free day for us.
To be honest, I had a hard time deciding whether it\'s a good thing to occassionally lie depending on the circumstance at hand.
Lying may seem simple and harmless at first, but just like any addiction, you\'ll soon find yourself trapped and entangled more than you could have ever imagined.
I think it\'s so much better to tell the truth in any situation, rather than try to lie your way back to the truth.
People lose the people they love or the things they value when they get caught up in a lie.
It\'s difficult to always tell the truth because more often than not, truth hurts.
Anyhow, that was just my opinion.
I hope you have a wonderful day.
See you again on Monday.
Take care and God bless!
~Teacher C[이름] (^^,)/
To tell the truth is important in order to maintain the society.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Telling the truth is important in maintaining a/the society.
That is a very basic action and behavior.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> That action and behavior is very basic.
Although we always have to act and tell truly, sometimes we need tricky things to maintain a relationship and a society.
>> Although we always have to act and tell truthfully, sometimes, we also need to do tricky things to maintain a relationship and a society.
However, in the official behavior, it must be true.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: However, ideally, you should always tell the truth.
If you don\'t keep this, it would be very serious.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If you don\'t maintain this behavior, it would be very serious situation/matter.
Nobody believe the government.
>> Nobody believes the government.
At last, the society would be collapsed since there are no faith.
>> At last, the society would collapse since the people have no faith in it.
the relationship between persons, if there are no faith, the relationship would be no longer.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: In a relationship, if there is no faith, the relationship would not last long.
But there are exceptions.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> But there is always an exception.
That is a good lie.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It is called a white lie.
There are not only one answer in the world.
>> There is not only one answer in the world.
OR >> There are many answers in the world.
If you want to seek something, there would be many paths to go on.
>> If you want to seek for something, there are many paths that you could follow.
Though the true is only one, when we use as a tool that make the relationship be more soft, the lie is helpful, for example, in lovers.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: Though there is only one truth, if we want our relationship to grow softer, the lie is helpful like in the case of lovers.
It would make the mood be more softly.
>> It would make the mood more soft.
OR >> It would make the mood softer.
Basically, to pursue the true is very important.
>> Basically, to pursue the truth is very important.
OR >> Basically, pursuing the truth is very important.
If you cheat someone once, you would want to do once more.
>> If you cheat on someone once, you would want to do it once more.
To tell a lie or a true is a custom.
>> Telling a lie or the truth is a custom/practice.
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