2-44th Homework
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In a human society, we don't live alone and we cannot live alone. It's because human being is a social animal as we learned from a textbook. Living in the society is to have a relationship with other persons. Our action would be also made from interaction with other's behavior. We are sometimes angry or happy relying on some situation. After being indignant with something, we may finally regret it. And we try to find the method which we don't angry about something. At that time, I think the best thing is for you to observe other people. When they are angry, when they are happy. If you observe them, you would abruptly recognize something. It's very to take a long time, but if you catch it, it would be fully your own things. Interacting is a good thing to live together in the society. I think that the interaction is to understand me and them since we think about other's mind first. If we understand each other, we would find how to say or how to do.An unemotional people has to live alone.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
How\'s your Tuesday going so far?
I hope you\'re having a great time.
I think nobody is capable of living alone.
Like what you\'ve mentioned earlier, human beings are social beings and they need to interact with others.
Interacting with others is very important for us to truly understand ourselves.
Maybe it\'s because we are the reflection of what we want to see in this world.
Anyhow, that is my opinion regarding this matter.
I\'ll see you again on Thursday.
Take care always.
~Teacher C[이름] ^^
In a human society, we don\'t live alone and we cannot live alone.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> In a human society, it is difficult to be alone and live alone.
It\'s because human being is a social animal as we learned from a textbook.
>> It\'s because a human being is a social animal as we learned from a textbook.
Living in the society is to have a relationship with other persons.
>> Living in the society means building a relationship with other persons/people.
Our action would be also made from interaction with other\'s behavior.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: Our action would be predicted based from the interaction we have and others\' behavior.
We are sometimes angry or happy relying on some situation.
>> We are sometimes angry or happy depending on the situation.
After being indignant with something, we may finally regret it.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> After being scornful with something, we may regret it in the end.
And we try to find the method which we don\'t angry about something.
>> And we try to find a method which won\'t get us angry about something.
At that time, I think the best thing is for you to observe other people.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> At that moment, I think the best thing for you to do is to observe other people.
When they are angry, when they are happy.
>> Observe them when they are angry or when they are happy.
If you observe them, you would abruptly recognize something.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If you observe them, you would suddenly realize something.
It\'s very to take a long time, but if you catch it, it would be fully your own things.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: It would take some time but you will soon catch/understand it.
Interacting is a good thing to live together in the society.
>> Interacting with others is a good way to harmoniously live together in the society.
I think that the interaction is to understand me and them since we think about other\'s mind first.
>> I think that interaction is all about understanding myself and others since we think about others\' minds first.
If we understand each other, we would find how to say or how to do.
>> If we understand each other, we would find a way on how to say or how to do something.
An unemotional people has to live alone.
>> Unemotional people have to live alone.
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