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2014-08-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jackie

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1) I said my subject was appropriate. >> I told him my subject was appropriate. (Since you are quoting what you told your professor. >> I told him that my subject is appropriate. >> CORRECT OR >> I told him that I have an appropriate theme. First, your explanation is hard to read visually. Can you consider me more so i can read more easily? No need to enter too much ">>" , or "CORRECT" . Only "(o)" which meanse OKAY after sentence will be enough. Furthermore, I asked to you that I always get confused with "say" and "tell" But you again did revise the sentence only. Why? If I say " I said to him that my theme was appropriate." Is it okay? And why do we use present tense after "that" when we still use past tense in following sentence" I told him my subject was appropriate." 2) All the other people are also watching this graph. >> The others are also looking at the graph. I know LOOK AT is more natural, but how do we differentiate WATCH and LOOK AT?

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday, [이름]!

Once again, thank you very much for the participation and questions.

Here are the corrections and explanations.

Sorry for the marks on each of the corrections.

They are a part of the format I need to follow.

Anyway, thank you very much for the suggestion.

It is a great help in the progress of our class.

Have a great day!

 

~~Teacher Jackie

 

First, your explanation is hard to read visually.

 First, your explanation is difficult to read.

OR

 Can you consider me more so i can read more easily?

Can you give me consideration so I can understand easily?

OR

Can you give me some consideration so I can read more easily?
No need to enter too much \">>\" , or \"CORRECT\" .
There is no need to enter too many characters like \">>\" , or \"CORRECT\" .

 Only \"(o)\" which meanse OKAY after sentence will be enough.

Only \"(o)\" which means OKAY after each sentence will be enough.
Furthermore, I asked to you that I always get confused with \"say\" and \"tell\"

Furthermore, I told you that I always get confused on the use of \"say\" and \"tell\".
But you again did revise the sentence only. Why?

But same as before, you only revised the sentence. Why?
If I say \" I said to him that my theme was appropriate.\" Is it okay?
If I say \"I said to him that my theme was appropriate.\" Is it okay?

(Yes, it is okay. But it would be better to reconstruct the sentence this way : \" I told him that my theme was appropriate.\" )

In this way ,the sentence becomes simple and brief. It is easier to understand.
And why do we use present tense after \"that\" when we still use past tense in following sentence\" I told him my subject was appropriate.\"

And why do we use present tense after \" that\" when used past tense in the following sentence \" I told him my subject was appropriate.\"?

Thank you for noticing. The correct sentence is \"I told him my subject is appropriate.\"

I know LOOK AT is more natural, but how do we differentiate WATCH and LOOK AT?

I know LOOK AT sounds more natural than WATCH, but how do we differentiate WATCH and LOOK AT?

We use LOOK AT when our attention is drawn to something which is static.

For example:

The group is looking at the pictures posted on the wall.

The class looks at the chalk board.

We use WATCH when our attention is drawn to something which is at motion.

For example:

Kids nowadays love watching television programs.

Nadine watched the truck pass by the road.

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