2-47th Homework
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강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Well, I used to deeply think about this issue.
I think that this is just a stereotypical point of view.
I\'ve seen and experienced different situations where boys and girls are able to get along well with each other.
Anyway, thanks for sending this in.
Take good care!
I don\'t think so.
>>> Correct!
When I went to school, my school was just for boys.
>>> Correct!
Therefore, my friends and I were very curious about girls who had around ages with us.
>>> Therefore, my friends and I were very curious about girls who had the same age with us.
And then we could not easily contact with girls and we didn\'t know how to say or how to act.
>>> And that time, we could not easily communicate with girls and didn\'t know what to say or how to act in front of them.
Nowadays, we are talking about the gender equality.
>>> Nowadays, we are talking about gender equality.
I think that it would be established based on understanding each other.
>>> I think it would be established based on how deep we understand each other.
To understand each other, we have to get the more conversation each other and to get the connection physically or mentally.
>>> To understand each other, we have to communicate more with each other and try to understand our physical and mental differences.
After we are accustomed to each other, we could easily understand.
>>> After we got more accustomed to each other, we could easily understand.
In other cases, if there are no comprehension, there is always a conflict.
>>> In other cases, if there is no comprehension, there is always a conflict.
It\'s because they don\'t know about each other.
>>> It\'s because they don\'t know anything about each other.
To get along with each other, my demand is not only important but a opposite\'s opinion is also precious.
>>> To get along well, everyone must respect and consider each other\'s opinion.
If you want to respect you from others, you have to respect the opposite.
>>> If you want others to respect you, you have to respect other people too.
To respect and to understand others, I think many contacts are very good to achieve it.
>>> To learn to respect and understand others, I think having frequent conversations is really necessary.
The dual-sex schools are a better idea.
>>> The mixed-gender education or co-education is a better idea.
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