2-48th Homework

I think that six hours for watching TV is long. Generally, we start to work at 9 A.M everyday and we leave an office at 6 P.M. Let's say to sleep at 12 P.M. If so, after finishing to work, six hours are just the time to watch TV before going to bed. During this time, they don't anything but watching TV. Maybe, they would eat the meal as watching TV. It's very crazy. In this time, we can do everything. Since they are accustomed to watching TV, they could not easily stop it. Many people say that TV is an idiotic thing. If you watch TV all time, you may be fool. If they decrease the time for watch TV to a half, we could do many things at that time. But TV show is very exciting and very interesting. Therefore, to decrease the watching time is not easy. There are many attraction for stopping to watch TV. And also many people are addicted to TV. In normal cases, someone doesn't want to stop to watch TV. It's because TV is very attractive. At once they escape from TV, they feel happy.

Hi, [이름]! Thank you very much for writing in our composition board again. Your insights were very interesting and I totally agree with them. Watching TV for six hours in a day affects a person\'s productivity. The television was labeled as an idiot box for a reason. Although there are many good and educational TV shows, people still prefer to watch shows that don\'t offer a lot of substance. Personally speaking, I am the type of person who hates wasting time. I\'d rather read a book or do something more productive than watch TV. I\'d rather spend time with my family or with my dogs than waste my time watching TV. Watching television is a good form of entertainment but like all of the other forms of entertainment, it should be limited. Anyhow, that\'s my opinion in relation to this matter. I hope you\'re having a great day. See you again tomorrow. ^^ ~Teacher C[이름] :) I think that six hours for watching TV is long. >> I think that six hours of watching TV is long. Generally, we start to work at 9 A.M everyday and we leave an office at 6 P.M. >> Generally, we start to work at 9:00 A.M everyday and we leave the office at 6:00 P.M. Let\'s say to sleep at 12 P.M. >> Let\'s say most of us go to sleep at 12 A.M. OR >> Let\'s say most of us go to sleep at 12 midnight. If so, after finishing to work, six hours are just the time to watch TV before going to bed. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: If so, after finishing work, we have atleast six hours to use before going to bed. During this time, they don\'t anything but watching TV. >> During this time, most of us don\'t do anything but watch TV. Maybe, they would eat the meal as watching TV. >> Maybe, they would eat their meal while watching TV. It\'s very crazy. >> CORRECT! OR >> It\'s very insane. In this time, we can do everything. >> CORRECT! OR >> During this time, we can actually do anything. Since they are accustomed to watching TV, they could not easily stop it. >> CORRECT! OR >> Since they are used to watching TV all the time, it is difficult for them to stop. Many people say that TV is an idiotic thing. >> CORRECT! OR >> A lot of people label the TV as an idiot box. If you watch TV all time, you may be fool. >> If you watch TV all the time then you may be a fool. If they decrease the time for watch TV to a half, we could do many things at that time. >> If they decrease the time in watching TV and cut it into half, they could do many things with the remaining time. But TV show is very exciting and very interesting. >> But a TV show is very exciting and very interesting. Therefore, to decrease the watching time is not easy. >> CORRECT! OR >> Therefore, decreasing the time in watching TV is not easy. There are many attraction for stopping to watch TV. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: There are many attractions on TV that\'s why we cannot stop watching. And also many people are addicted to TV. >> And also, many people are addicted to TV. In normal cases, someone doesn\'t want to stop to watch TV. >> In normal cases, many of us don\'t want to stop watching TV. It\'s because TV is very attractive. >> CORRECT! OR >> It\'s because the TV has a lot of interesting things to offer. At once they escape from TV, they feel happy. >> But I think once they escape from their addiction in watching TV, they will feel happy.