2-51th Homework

2016-10-06 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

Habits are a very sensible behavior for us to make a good life. I think that another name of habits may be an addiction. Good addiction is habits and bad addiction is just addiction. In the life, the good habits are very useful to maintain your health and finance. In my case, I always consider about the purchase when I want to buy something. Is the appliance good for me or not? More thinking about the purchase prevents the excessing spending. Of course, there is also some defect that is too long to buy something. Exercise is also a good habit to preserve our health. I think that periodic exercises are very good to body and mind. After exercising, perspiration is an evidence that we live. Many people don't want to move their body since they don't have the habit. Exercise is also the habit. In some day, we cannot abruptly move our body to exercise. If you abruptly do that, you will be hurt. However, if you have continuously exercised, it's okay. I recommend you to have a good habit.

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Hi, [이름]! ^^ Thank you very much for answering our homework today and sharing about your good habits. I think a habit is similar to a routine or a practice. It is already part of your system and you automatically do it. Building a good habit is sometimes difficult because it requires discipline and patience. But I agree with you when you said good habits can help you build a better life. Thank you very much for sharing your thoughts and opinions today. See you again tomorrow. Take care and God bless. ^^ ~Teacher C[이름] :) Habits are a very sensible behavior for us to make a good life. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Habits are very sensible behaviors that we use to make a good life. I think that another name of habits may be an addiction. >> I think the other name for habit would be addiction. Good addiction is habits and bad addiction is just addiction. >> Good addiction is a habit and bad addiction is just an addiction. In the life, the good habits are very useful to maintain your health and finance. >> In life, good habits are very useful to maintain one\'s health and financial status. In my case, I always consider about the purchase when I want to buy something. >> In my case, I always consider my purchases when I want to buy something. Is the appliance good for me or not? >> CORRECT! OR >> Will I benefit from the appliance or not? More thinking about the purchase prevents the excessing spending. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Thinking deeply about the purchase prevents me from excessively spending. Of course, there is also some defect that is too long to buy something. >> Of course, there is also a disadvantage to it and that is the delay in buying something. Exercise is also a good habit to preserve our health. >> CORRECT! OR >> Exercise is also a good habit in preserving our health. I think that periodic exercises are very good to body and mind. >> I think that periodic exercises are very good to the/our body and mind. After exercising, perspiration is an evidence that we live. >> CORRECT! OR >> After exercising, the sweat/perspiration is an evidence that we are alive. Many people don\'t want to move their body since they don\'t have the habit. >> CORRECT! OR >> Lots of people refuse to mover their bodies since it\'s not part of their habit. Exercise is also the habit. >> Exercise/exercising is also a habit. In some day, we cannot abruptly move our body to exercise. >> In some days, we cannot abruptly move our body/bodies to exercise. If you abruptly do that, you will be hurt. >> CORRECT! OR >> If you do it without preparation, you could get hurt. However, if you have continuously exercised, it\'s okay. >> CORRECT! OR >> However, if you continuously exercise, it\'s okay. I recommend you to have a good habit. >> I recommend that you start a good habit.

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