2-52th Homework

2016-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Generally, I don't think about the TV shows and TV whether it is good or not. I just see it as a fun. We now live in the flood of information, such as the internet, TV and mobile. We can contact a lot of information through those. TV is also a very efficient tool as a propagator. We are always exposed by TV shows. Some program have a very reality in other country, like as America. In Korea, many reality program is related with the comics. Therefore, we could not evaluate the program as a good thing but we would consider it as a fun. On the other thought, many parents told their children, "Don't too much watch TV, if not, you will be a fool". If TV is good, parents didn't say like that. I think that TV is just TV. The problem is how to use it. Just watching TV makes you a fool. But if you collect a good program among TV shows, you would take an advantage. Usually, in the case of adults, they strictly determine the contents of TV shows, but children don't have an ability yet.

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Hi, [이름]! ^^ How\'s your day so far? Thank you very much for answering our homework for today. Your opinions in relation to this matter are really interesting. I honestly think TV has its advantages and disadvantages and it should be used with caution because it shows a lot of programs/TV shows that are not suitable for all ages. Parents should be careful and should supervise their children when using this powerful tool. Children should also be taught to limit their time in watching television. Anyhow, that is my opinion regarding this matter. I hope you\'re having a great day. See you again on Tuesday. ^^ ~Teacher C[이름] :) Generally, I don\'t think about the TV shows and TV whether it is good or not. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Generally, I have never considered the pros and cons of having a TV and the TV shows that I watch in it. I just see it as a fun. >> I just see it as a source of fun. OR >> I just see it as a form of entertainment. We now live in the flood of information, such as the internet, TV and mobile. >> We are flooded with information for the Internet, TV and mobile phones. We can contact a lot of information through those. >> CORRECT! OR >> We can access a lot of information from those. TV is also a very efficient tool as a propagator. >> CORRECT! OR >> TV is also used as a very useful tool in propagating things. We are always exposed by TV shows. >> We are always exposed to TV shows. Some program have a very reality in other country, like as America. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: In some countries like America, reality TV shows are popular. In Korea, many reality program is related with the comics. >> In Korea, many reality programs are related to the comics. Therefore, we could not evaluate the program as a good thing but we would consider it as a fun. >> Therefore, we could not evaluate the program whether it is a good program or a bad program but we would consider it as fun. On the other thought, many parents told their children, \"Don\'t too much watch TV, if not, you will be a fool\". >> On the other thought, many parents told their children, \"Don\'t watch TV too much. If not, you will be a fool\". If TV is good, parents didn\'t say like that. >> If TV is good/beneficial, parents won\'t say that. I think that TV is just TV. >> I think that the TV is just a TV. The problem is how to use it. >> CORRECT! OR >> The problem is the proper use of TV. Just watching TV makes you a fool. >> CORRECT! OR >> Watching TV all day would turn you into a fool. But if you collect a good program among TV shows, you would take an advantage. >> But if you collect a good programs among the TV shows that you watch, it would be advantageous for you. Usually, in the case of adults, they strictly determine the contents of TV shows, but children don\'t have an ability yet. >> Usually, in the case of adults, they strictly determine the contents of TV shows, but children don\'t have that ability yet.

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