2-54th Homework
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I guess he would write the success as doing something which you want to do at the moment. We always regret the past things which we didn't do those at that time. Like that, "If I return, I would do it." But the past never return to you, and time is gone as a thrown arrow. A while ago, I red the news about a mother and daughter. The mother tours with her daughter over the world. She was abruptly aware of the life that is very short. After her friend died for a cancel. At that time, she decided to travel the world with her daughter under her husband 's supporting. She said that the travel was not difficult like as people just thought about it, but determining the travel was difficult. I envy her, it's because I don't do that right now. I have a lot of thing, for example, a family, a job, etc. I think she focuses on her life which she wants to live with a satisfaction. She is very brave. Until now, I'm not brave. I always want to do it like her. Life is very short, we live a life we want.
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Hi, [이름]! ^^
Thank you for promptly doing your homework.
I enjoyed reading your thoughts about this matter.
I think life is short too and we should live it the way we want it.
It\'s too short to be spent on regrets.
The past can never be rewritten but we have the power to make our present and our future a better one.
I hope you\'re having a great day. I\'ll see you again tomorrow. Take care and God bless.
~Teacher C[이름] ^^
I guess he would write the success as doing something which you want to do at the moment.
>> I guess he defineD the word success as doing something which you want to do at the moment.
We always regret the past things which we didn\'t do those at that time.
>> We always regret the things which we didn\'t do in the past.
Like that, \"If I return, I would do it.\"
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: We always say: \"If I could return, I would do it.\"
OR >> We always say: \"If I could turn back in time, I would do it.\"
But the past never return to you, and time is gone as a thrown arrow.
>> But the past will never return to you, and the time is already gone like a thrown arrow.
OR >> But no matter what you do, the past will never return because the time has already gone like a thrown arrow.
A while ago, I red the news about a mother and daughter.
>> A while ago, I read a news about a mother and daughter.
The mother tours with her daughter over the world.
>> The mother toured with her daughter all over the world.
She was abruptly aware of the life that is very short.
>> She was aware that life is abrupt or very short.
After her friend died for a cancel.
>> She thought of this after her friend died of cancer.
At that time, she decided to travel the world with her daughter under her husband \'s supporting.
>> At that time, she decided to travel the world with her daughter under her husband \'s support.
She said that the travel was not difficult like as people just thought about it, but determining the travel was difficult.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: She said that traveling is not as difficult as people think. However, determining where to go is difficult.
I envy her, it\'s because I don\'t do that right now.
>> I envy her, because I can\'t do that right now.
I have a lot of thing, for example, a family, a job, etc.
>> I have a lot of things going on right now. I have a family, a job, and others.
I think she focuses on her life which she wants to live with a satisfaction.
>> I think she focuses on living a life that would bring her satisfaction.
She is very brave.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> She is a very brave person.
Until now, I\'m not brave.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I\'m not as brave as her.
I always want to do it like her.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I want to live life like her.
Life is very short, we live a life we want.
>> Life is very short and we should live it the way we want it.
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