2-55th Homework

Yes, it should be censored by parents. It's because children could not classify those from many contents. Of course, they grow up and they become adults. But now they live under the protection of parents, and their consciousness is not matured yet. In the case of adults, someone confuses the difference of real and virtual. I think, my kids would see the contents that are bad or good if they become adults. If they are adults, parents could not prevent to seeing the contents. At that time, the determination is taken by them, not parents. As far as they live under the protection of parents, the contents that are bad in the internet has to be censored by parents, and it is a role of parents. In the child age, the good consciousness and good thought is very best thing to build in mind first. After setting up the base, the invasion of the bad contents is not a problem. It's because we can screen it or we can determine that it is not real or not good. Therefore, parents have to censor it.

Hi, [이름]! ^^ Wow! I\'m really amazed with your composition today. You were on point in every aspect of this argument. Congratulations! ^^ I think parents are very much responsible in protecting their children from bad influences including the bad things in the Internet. Bad influences don\'t only come in the form of people. Nowadays, bad influences are more advanced and they take the form of gadgets and websites. Like I always say, technology is a powerful tool when used correctly but it could also be a very bad enemy when used incorrectly. Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great day. I\'ll see you again next week. ^^ ~Teacher C[이름] :) Yes, it should be censored by parents. >> CORRECT! OR >> I agree that it should be censored by parents. It\'s because children could not classify those from many contents. >> CORRECT! OR >> It\'s because children would have a hard time classifying them from the numerous contents. Of course, they grow up and they become adults. >> CORRECT! OR >> Of course, they would one day grow up and become adults. But now they live under the protection of parents, and their consciousness is not matured yet. >> But now they live under the protection of their parents, and their minds are not mature yet. In the case of adults, someone confuses the difference of real and virtual. >> In the case of adults, some are confused with the difference of what is real and virtual. I think, my kids would see the contents that are bad or good if they become adults. >> CORRECT! OR >> I think when my kids become adults, they would see the good and bad contents. If they are adults, parents could not prevent to seeing the contents. >> If they are adults, parents could not prevent/stop them from seeing the contents. At that time, the determination is taken by them, not parents. >> At that time, the determination is taken by them and not their parents. As far as they live under the protection of parents, the contents that are bad in the internet has to be censored by parents, and it is a role of parents. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: For as long as they live under the protection of their parents, the contents that are bad in the Internet has to be censored by the parents, because it\'s their role/responsibility as parents. In the child age, the good consciousness and good thought is very best thing to build in mind first. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: At a young age, good consciousness and good thoughts are the best things that should be built in their minds first. After setting up the base, the invasion of the bad contents is not a problem. >> CORRECT! OR >> After establishing these things in their minds, parents don\'t have to worry about the bad contents that their children might see. It\'s because we can screen it or we can determine that it is not real or not good. >> CORRECT! OR >> It\'s because it would be easier for us to determine later on whether the things that we see are not real or not good. Therefore, parents have to censor it. >> CORRECT! OR >> In conclusion, parents have to censor it.