2-56th Homework

2016-10-18 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I think there is no the better choice. There is only an anxiety that we have to go together. I had the same anxiety. The reason of the anxiety occurs from not doing together as others do that. Many friends go to college or university. But If I don't go to college, it maybe very stressful in Korea. In Korea, if we don't go right on to college, we sometimes feel like a loser. Nobody wants to be dealt with the loser. Therefore, there are much stress for going to college so that they go right on to college. But passing this time, I often think about that. It's a right way or it's the best way? Or Is it only way to live a long life? I have still the anxiety of the loser. We always want to go an unknown way in order to find something. However, we lack the brave to do. Doing bravely something is not easy since there are many sacrifice for doing it. All of us are a conservative. We don't want to loose our property or life style. But if you want to find something, we must bravely do it.

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Hi, [이름]! ^_^ How\'s your day so far? Thank you for immediately answering our homework for today. I think some people choose to go to college or study in a university because they want to get ahead from the rest. They want to immediately finish studying and start building a career. On the other hand, some people choose to work or travel because they want to experience how it\'s like to be free and independent. When I was younger, I\'ve always wanted to study in the university and finish my schooling right away because I wanted to start my career and work my way up the corporate ladder. I am not from a rich family and I didn\'t have enough money to travel back then although I seriously wanted to do just that. Now that I\'m older, I think I made the right choice but the problem is that, I am now bound to my job and I don\'t have the time to travel. It\'s funny because when I was younger, I had the time but didn\'t have the money. But now that I\'m older, I have the money but I don\'t have the time anymore. That\'s how life is sometimes. Anyhow, this is my opinion in relation to this matter. I hope you\'re doing great. See you again on Thursday. :) ~Teacher C[이름] I think there is no the better choice. >> I think there is no better choice. There is only an anxiety that we have to go together. >> CORRECT! OR >> We all have to experience this kind of anxiety. I had the same anxiety. >> CORRECT! OR >> I\'ve experienced the same kind of anxiety. The reason of the anxiety occurs from not doing together as others do that. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: The reason of the anxiety was not being able to do what others do. Many friends go to college or university. >> CORRECT! OR >> Many friends study in a college or university. But If I don\'t go to college, it maybe very stressful in Korea. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: But if I am in Korea and I don\'t go to college it may be very stressful for me. In Korea, if we don\'t go right on to college, we sometimes feel like a loser. >> In Korea, if we don\'t go right/straight to college, we sometimes feel like a loser. Nobody wants to be dealt with the loser. >> Nobody wants to deal with a loser. Therefore, there are much stress for going to college so that they go right on to college. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Therefore, people go to college because it\'s more stressful not to. But passing this time, I often think about that. >> But as time passed by, I often thought about/of it. It\'s a right way or it\'s the best way? >> Is it the right way or the best way? Or Is it only way to live a long life? >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Or is it just another option to have a better life? I have still the anxiety of the loser. >> I still have the anxiety felt by a loser. We always want to go an unknown way in order to find something. >> We always want to go to an unknown way in order to find something. However, we lack the brave to do. >> However, we lack the bravery to do it. Doing bravely something is not easy since there are many sacrifice for doing it. >> Doing something bravely is not easy since there are many sacrifices in doing it. All of us are a conservative. >> All of us are conservatives. We don\'t want to loose our property or life style. >> CORRECT! OR >> Most of us are afraid of losing our property or life style. But if you want to find something, we must bravely do it. >> But if you want to find something, you must bravely do it.

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