2-58th Homework

Many people who are environmentalists warn about the earth environment. Sometimes we feel the climatic change. But we have to live in the earth as we find something to use for our living. It would be damaging the earth. Although Environmentalists warn about the pollution of the earth, many people actually don't care about it. Many people including me feel the seriousness of the environment on head but not on heart. Therefore, when we watch a documentary about the environment, we feel the importance of the earth. After seeing it, we forget it. It's because we have to live as I previously said it. We have some dilemma about the environment. To save or conserve the earth, we have to save the resource of the earth. But if we do that, our life would be very uncomfortable and someone could not endure it. And on the earth there are an unbalance between eastern and western. In the wester they want to save the earth, but in the eastern they want to live comfortably. There are gaps.

Hi, [이름]! ^^ I hope the weather in your area has already improved. I also hope your good mood wasn\'t affected by the gloomy weather. Thank you for doing your best to answer our homework and make good sentences. I think most of us want to save the earth from further distraction but we are caught between our personal interests and the decision to keep our environment preserved. You\'re right when you said most of us choose to make a living rather than help save our enviroment. Of course we need to make a living in order to survive and it\'s far easier to turn a blind eye than take action. It\'s not convenient and it\'s difficult to carry out. However in my opinion, there are ways to help the environment and at the same time earn a living. People just really need to be more resourceful and look outside the box. Anyhow, this is just my opinion in relation to this matter. I hope you\'re having a great day. I\'ll see you again on Thursday. Take care and God bless. ~Teacher C[이름] :) Many people who are environmentalists warn about the earth environment. >> Many people who are environmentalists have warned us about the earth\'s/environment\'s condition. Sometimes we feel the climatic change. >> CORRECT! OR >> There are times when we feel the effect of climate change. But we have to live in the earth as we find something to use for our living. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: But we have to live and find a source of living. It would be damaging the earth. >> CORRECT! OR >> Our methods damage the earth. Although Environmentalists warn about the pollution of the earth, many people actually don\'t care about it. >> Although environmentalists have warned us about pollution, many people actually don\'t care about it. Many people including me feel the seriousness of the environment on head but not on heart. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Many people including me feel the seriousness of the environment problem but we don\'t know how to act. Therefore, when we watch a documentary about the environment, we feel the importance of the earth. >> CORRECT! OR >> Therefore, when we watch a documentary about the environment, we feel the earth\'s importance. After seeing it, we forget it. >> CORRECT! OR >> However, after watching it, we immediately forget about it. It\'s because we have to live as I previously said it. >> It\'s because we have to live as I previously said. We have some dilemma about the environment. >> CORRECT! OR >> We feel ambivalent when we talk about the environment. To save or conserve the earth, we have to save the resource of the earth. >> To save or conserve the earth, we have to save the resources of the earth. But if we do that, our life would be very uncomfortable and someone could not endure it. >> CORRECT! OR >> But if we choose to do that, it would lead to inconvenience and many people might not be able to withstand it. And on the earth there are an unbalance between eastern and western. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: There is also an imbalance between the east and the west. the wester they want to save the earth, but in the eastern they want to live comfortably. >> In the west, they want to save the earth but in the east, they want to live comfortably. There are gaps. >> CORRECT! OR >> There are gaps these two.