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2011-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 Christine

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Q: Can you describe your style of clothing? What is your fashion style? My fashion style is reflected in when I chose wear clothe. So I am a variety style of clothing. For example If I feel gloomy I chose gray color and simple style. But sometimes I have great feel and I wear a skirt and pretty blouse like cute girl. In these days I prefer to wear sports clothes such as fitness wear. Because to keep my weight I try to exersise ordinary as soon as time because I don't have much time.

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This is the continuation of my corrections: ^^,  ~ T. Christine >_<   Q: Can you describe your style of clothing? What is your fashion style?My fashion style is reflected in when I chose wear clothe. So I am a variety style of clothing.>> My fashion style actually varies depending on my mood. For example If I feel gloomy I chose gray color and simple style. >> For example, if I feel gloomy, I choose gray colors and just simple styles.But sometimes I have great feel and I wear a skirt and pretty blouse like cute girl. >> However, if I am feeling great, I wear skirts and pretty blouses, I dress like a cute girl.  In these days I prefer to wear sports clothes such as fitness wear. >> These days, I prefer to wear sports or fitness wear. Because to keep my weight I try to exersise ordinary as soon as time because I don't have much time. >> This is because I am trying maintain a healthy weight by doing regular exercises.

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