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Q: Can you describe your style of clothing? What is your fashion style?
My fashion style is reflected in when I chose wear clothe.
So I am a variety style of clothing.
For example If I feel gloomy I chose gray color and simple style.
But sometimes I have great feel and I wear a skirt and pretty blouse like cute girl. In these days I prefer to wear sports clothes such as fitness wear. Because to keep my weight I try to exersise ordinary as soon as time because I don't have much time.
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This is the continuation of my corrections: ^^,
~ T. Christine >_<
Q: Can you describe your style of clothing? What is your fashion style?My fashion style is reflected in when I chose wear clothe. So I am a variety style of clothing.>> My fashion style actually varies depending on my mood.
For example If I feel gloomy I chose gray color and simple style.
>> For example, if I feel gloomy, I choose gray colors and just simple styles.But sometimes I have great feel and I wear a skirt and pretty blouse like cute girl.
>> However, if I am feeling great, I wear skirts and pretty blouses, I dress like a cute girl.
In these days I prefer to wear sports clothes such as fitness wear.
>> These days, I prefer to wear sports or fitness wear.
Because to keep my weight I try to exersise ordinary as soon as time because I don't have much time.
>> This is because I am trying maintain a healthy weight by doing regular exercises.
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