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My country have many holidays. For examples, Lunar New Year's Day, Chuseok, Korean Thanksgiving Day, Hangul, Korean alphabet and many more. When I was young, my favorite holidays was Lunar New Year's Day because I could eat many foods. My mother and my sister made many foods for many guests and forefather. I had to wait to eat but I always fall asleep. However after I grow up, I don't like Lunar New Year's Day and Chuseok because I have to make many foods for guests and forfather. It is very diffcult. I can understand my mother after I become mother. My children like these days like my childhood so I am happy.

Hello [이름]!   It\'s great to check your homework again. Some reminders: 1. Make the subject agree with the verb. example: My country has many holidays. 2. This is how you can introduce examples in writing: My country has many holidays, for examples, Lunar New Year\'s Day, Chuseok, Korean Thanksgiving Day, Hangul, Korean alphabet and many more. 3. Use past tense if you refer to the past. example: I had to wait to eat but I always fell asleep.   Teacher Venus^^   My country have many holidays. For examples, Lunar New Year\'s Day, Chuseok, Korean Thanksgiving Day, Hangul, Korean alphabet and many more. >>>My country has many holidays, for examples, Lunar New Year\'s Day, Chuseok, Korean Thanksgiving Day, Hangul, Korean alphabet and many more.   When I was young, my favorite holidays was Lunar New Year\'s Day because I could eat many foods. >>>When I was young, my favorite holiday was Lunar New Year\'s Day because I could eat many foods. My mother and my sister made many foods for many guests and forefather. >>>My mother and my sister made many foods for many guests and for our ancestors. I had to wait to eat but I always fall asleep. >>>I had to wait to eat but I always fell asleep. However after I grow up, I don\'t like Lunar New Year\'s Day and Chuseok because I have to make many foods for guests and forfather. >>>However now that I\'m a grown-up, I don\'t like Lunar New Year\'s Day and Chuseok because I have to make many foods for guests and for our ancestors. It is very diffcult. >>>It is very difficult.   I can understand my mother after I become mother. >>>I can understand my mother now that I\'m a mother. My children like these days like my childhood so I am happy. >>>did you mean: My children like my childhood experiences so I am happy. >>>OR: My children have similar childhood experiences so I am happy.