2-59th Homework

2016-10-28 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I agree that U.S.A is a super-power nation. But I don't agree with the best country that is U.S.A. There are many countries better than U.S.A. Of course, the power of country comes from its system. Therefore, the system may be superior to others. This opinion is just denpeded on my own. Actually, I don't like U.S. It's because it behaves like a police in the world. It always cut in a collision area to get advantage. And there is always an war where it is. It is the point that I dislike U.S. There are many people to be taken a hardship caused by U.S. For example, in the middle east of asia there are many collision with each other. I think it is the reason why U.S wants to get a lot of resources like an oil. U.S always say the it is to make a peace in this area. But I think it is just for U.S. It is just like the colonial era of the westen. Their justice was the explore of new world. Actually, they wanted to find the resources for them to use in the background. U.S just do like that.

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Hi, [이름]! ^__^Thank you very much for doing your homework. I think your opinions are good and you are correct when you said the USA is not the best although they could be considered as one of the most powerful countries in the world. I honestly thing the United States\' economy is now starting to go down that\'s why they meddle with international issues especially the ones in the middle east. They are hoping that by doing these, they can sell more weapons or end up seizing the oil reserves in those areas. It makes a lot of sense. Anyhow, I hope you are having a great day.  See you again on Tuesday. ^^ ~Teacher C[이름] :) I agree that U.S.A is a super-power nation. >> CORRECT! OR >> I agree that U.S.A is a powerful nation. But I don\'t agree with the best country that is U.S.A. >> But I don\'t agree that is U.S.A is the best country. There are many countries better than U.S.A. >> CORRECT! OR >> There are a lot of countries than perform better than U.S.A. Of course, the power of country comes from its system. >> Of course, the power of a country comes from its system. Therefore, the system may be superior to others. >> CORRECT! OR >> Some systems are superior than others. This opinion is just denpeded on my own. >> This is just my own opinion. Actually, I don\'t like U.S. >> CORRECT! OR >> To be honest, I don\'t like U.S. It\'s because it behaves like a police in the world. >> CORRECT! OR >> It\'s because they boss around other nations. It always cut in a collision area to get advantage. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: It always cuts-in in a collision area and take advantage of the situation. And there is always an war where it is. >> There\'s always a war where it is involved. It is the point that I dislike U.S. >> It is the point why I dislike the U.S. There are many people to be taken a hardship caused by U.S. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Many people suffer because of what the U.S. is doing. For example, in the middle east of asia there are many collision with each other. >> For example, in the middle east of Asia there are many collisions/disputes that are happening. I think it is the reason why U.S wants to get a lot of resources like an oil. >> I think it is the reason why the U.S wants to get a lot of resources like oil. U.S always say the it is to make a peace in this area. >> The U.S always says it\'s purpose is to maintain peace in this area. But I think it is just for U.S. It is just like the colonial era of the westen. >> But I think for the U.S. it is just like the colonial era. Their justice was the explore of new world. >> Their purpose was to explore the new world. Actually, they wanted to find the resources for them to use in the background. >> CORRECT! OR >> Actually, they wanted to find the resources for them to use secretly. U.S just do like that. >> The U.S likes doing that.

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