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Hello [이름]! Socialization is indeed natural among humans but the way we socialize is changing. Whatever the change, however, everyone should respect each other\'s preference. Have a good day! ~~T.Dee
I think that it is a good idea to meat co-workers outside work.
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But it should be after they already get along with each other.
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Socialization with them outside work under pressure should be avoided.
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In my parent period, companies have emphasized that all member of the company is like a family.
>> In my parent\'s time, companies have emphasized that all member of the company is like family.
But, in modern society, most people separately consider inside and outside work.
>>But, in the modern society, most people consider life inside and outside of work separately.
They think that it is important to get along with co-workers, but it in just inside work.
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They don\'t want to meet or have a relationship with them outside work.
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I absolutely understand the thinking.
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>>OR: I completely understand them.
The most popular word is \'Wo-Li-Bal\', it comes from \'work life balance\'.
>>The most popular expression is \'Wo-Li-Bal\', which came from \'work life balance\'.
It means that work and life are separated.
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Surely, It depends on the person and the kind of work.
>>Surely, it depends on the person and the kind of work he or she does.
When I was in Japan, I got along with my colleagues and sometimes we have met outside work.
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And they went to Jeju and we enjoyed together after I moved to Jeju island.
>> After moving to Jeju Island, they came to visit me and we enjoyed spending time together.
But, the important thing is that it was what we wanted, not under compulsion.
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