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학생이 쓴 원문
I felt my father is the greatest person and if I become a teacher,I also be the greatest person like him.After that thinking,I decided to be a techer and As growing up,I realized how much my father tried to effort for students and got so much stress but he never gave up and led his students.I can't find a teacher like him in my school life and I know now he is a real educator and a great teacher than anyone else.Students are still visiting my home on Teacher's day and now we are invited their weddings.I really respect my father and I hope to be a teacher like him and I will do my best for my future students.
강사 첨삭
I felt my father is the greatest person and if I become a teacher,I also be the greatest person like him.
>>> I felt my father is the greatest person and if I become a teacher,I will also be the greatest person like him.
After that thinking,I decided to be a techer and As growing up,I realized how much my father tried to effort for students and got so much stress but he never gave up and led his students.
>>> After that thouht, I decided to be a teacher and as I was growing up, I realized how much my father exerted his effort for students and how much he got stressed, ut he never gave up and he led his students towards the good.
I can't find a teacher like him in my school life and I know now he is a real educator and a great teacher than anyone else.
>>> Correct
Students are still visiting my home on Teacher's day and now we are invited their weddings.
>>>Students are still visiting my home on Teacher's day and now we are invited to their weddings.
I really respect my father and I hope to be a teacher like him and I will do my best for my future students.
>>> Correct
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