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One day when I go to the university,I got a call from the student informing she got 70scores in her midterm english exam.She almost accomplished 50scores up.I couldn't believe that and I can't imagine how much I was happy.She thanked me a lot and I became a famous tutoring teacher among her friends and I was asked so many students to teach them and I have teached students during the vacation time.I also teached my younger cousin brother when he was a first and second grade in high school and he studied very hard so I heard the news he got the fifth grade in his class.I think there's nothing I love,do my best and I can do well except teaching.I'm short of teaching career and experience much yet but I believe I can be a good teacher not only teaching english but also my character.
강사 첨삭
One day when I go to the university,I got a call from the student informing she got 70scores in her midterm english exam.
>>> One day while I was on my way to the university, I got a call from the student informing me she got a score of 70 in her midterm English exam.
She almost accomplished 50scores up.
>>> She almost improved 50scores up.
I couldn't believe that and I can't imagine how much I was happy. -- correct
She thanked me a lot and I became a famous tutoring teacher among her friends and I was asked so many students to teach them and I have teached students during the vacation time.
>>> She thanked me a lot and I became a famous tutor among her friends and I was asked by so many students to teach them and I have taught students during vacation time.
I also teached my younger cousin brother when he was a first and second grade in high school and he studied very hard so I heard the news he got the fifth grade in his class.
>>> I also taught my younger cousin when he was first year and second year in high school and he studied very hard so I heard the news he got the fifth place in his class.
I think there's nothing I love,do my best and I can do well except teaching. -- correct
I'm short of teaching career and experience much yet but I believe I can be a good teacher not only teaching english but also my character.
>>> I'm short of teaching career and experience much yet but I believe I can be a good teacher in not only teaching english but also beacuse of my character.
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