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Q2: How are your grades in university and are you having any difficulties with your studies right now? Yes, I have some difficult when I study my major. Actually my major is Horticulture so we learn how to take care of plants or flowers. Therefore I could learn affectionate and warm hearted to all living things though I want to be a flight attendant I can't afford to spend lots of time my major. I always try to study in English and manner of service instead of focus on that. For that reasons my grades in university is not good.

Here are my corrections for this part of your composition. Please check them. Q2: How are your grades in university and are you having any difficulties with your studies right now? >> Correct.Yes, I have some difficult when I study my major. >> Yes, I have some dificulty when I study my major.Actually my major is Horticulture so we learn how to take care of plants or flowers. >> Correct. Therefore I could learn affectionate and warm hearted to all living things though I want to be a flight attendant I can't afford to spend lots of time my major. >> Therefore, I learn how o be affectionate and warm-hearted to all the living things. I want to be a flight attendant, so i can't spend much time for my major.I always try to study in English and manner of service instead of focus on that. >> I always try to study English and the correct manner of service instead of focusing on that.For that reasons my grades in university is not good. >> Because of these, my grades in the university are not good.