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2016-10-05 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

I think that my country is similar Japan and China. However many things are very different. I like a huge public sauna called Jjimjilbang which is from the traditional ondol heating system. I also like a delivery system in Korea. We can ask to delivery a lot of things to restaurants like pizza, chicken, beer, noodles and many more. These are different things.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ms. [이름]!

I agree with you! I think Korea, Japan and China have many similarities . But of course since these are different countries, you also have many differences. Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the given topic. Be careful today since the typhoon is currently in your area now. See you tomorrow!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

I think that my country is similar Japan and China.

>> I think that my country is similar to Japan and China.
However, many things are very different.

>> correct!
I like a huge public sauna called Jjimjilbang which is from the traditional Ondol heating system.

>> correct!
I also like a delivery system in Korea.

>> I also like the delivery system in Korea.
We can ask to delivery a lot of things to restaurants like pizza, chicken, beer, noodles and many more.

>> We can ask for a lot of things from a restaurant to be delivered like pizza, chicken, beer, noodles and many more.

These are different things.
>> correct!
OR>> These are some of the things that make us different from Japan and China.

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