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Hello, Ms. [이름]!
In today\'s world where everybody seems to be busy, chatting on line is a very convenient way to communicate with our friends and relatives who we can\'t see everyday. But of course, it has it\'s disadvantages too. Many people are so addicted with SNS that they look at their phone every minute which may distract them from studying or working. See you later!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
My favorite social network is Kakao Story.
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I usually visit the site three times a day.
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Because my friends have Kakao Story.
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Like I said before, I can\'t often meet my friends so I can\'t know my friends news.
>> Like I said before, I can\'t meet my friends often so I don\'t know the latest news about them.
However, I can know my friends\' news because of KakaoStory.
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I can read my friends\' posts and see their photos.
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It is very convenient.
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