2-6th Homework
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In media era, images and impressions are very important. In the past, we could heard something from other's talk or rumors. We could image something from that. In current, there are many things to propagate the property or images, for example, the internet, mass media and social networks. How to appeal or what to appeal to people is core but I think the most core is images and impressions in this era. For example, there are two goods that have a same quality and same function. The one company advertises the goods using a famous actor. The another only advertised the function of the goods. I think the first company's goods are more sold than the second. The consumers want to be a famous actor themselves as using the same goods with the actor. It is the images and impressions. If people have a bad image on something or someone, it is not easily changed. If you want to change, you have to totally endeavor to overcome the bad images. All want to have good images for the first time.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework and sharing your opinions regarding this matter.
I agree with you when you said first impressions make a lasting impression on people.
You\'ve probably heard of the saying: \"you never get a second chance to make a first impression\".
That\'s because once you make an impression, that would already serve as a basis for people to determine whether you\'ve passed the
standards or not.
Same is also true with products, goods and companies.
Once you make a bad impression on a person, it would most likely stay that way no matter how much you try to change it.
It\'s part of human nature.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great day.
See you on Thursday.
Take care.
~Teache C[이름] ^^
In media era, images and impressions are very important.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> In the reign of media, images and impressions are very important.
In the past, we could heard something from other\'s talk or rumors.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: In the past, we only hear news by word-of-mouth or through rumors.
We could image something from that.
>> We could imagine something from that.
OR >> We make our assumptions from that.
In current, there are many things to propagate the property or images, for example, the internet, mass media and social networks.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: There are currently many ways to propagate properties or images. Some of the examples would be the Internet, mass media and social networks.
How to appeal or what to appeal to people is core but I think the most core is images and impressions in this era.
>> How to appeal or what appeals to people is important but I think the most important things in this era are the images and impressions we make.
For example, there are two goods that have a same quality and same function.
>> For example, there are two goods that have the same quality and same function.
The one company advertises the goods using a famous actor.
>> The first company advertises the goods using a famous actor.
The another only advertised the function of the goods.
>> The other company only advertises the function of the goods.
I think the first company\'s goods are more sold than the second.
>> I think the first company\'s will sell more goods than the second company.
The consumers want to be a famous actor themselves as using the same goods with the actor.
>> The consumers want to be like the famous actor advertising the goods.
It is the images and impressions.
>> It is the images and impressions that did the trick.
If people have a bad image on something or someone, it is not easily changed.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If people have a bad image on something or someone, it cannot be easily changed.
If you want to change, you have to totally endeavor to overcome the bad images.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If you want to change people\'s impression, you have to totally exert an effort to overcome the bad images.
All want to have good images for the first time.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Everybody wants to make a good impression for the first time.
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