2. 7. Homework

2018-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: ** WRITING TASK ** Opinionated Questions. Should a person go to jail for kicking a cat? I laughed when I saw this question. I thought "Because teacher Blair knows that I have a cat and I love him, She asked this question." I love my cat and I also like street cats. I always carry a little bottle which is full of cat's feed and whenever I saw a street cat, I give it to the cat. If I saw a person who bully a cat, I will contact a police officer and report as animal abuse. If I can make a law, I want to make the people who kick a cat go to jail because I think they can do same thing to other people. The fact that many murderer start killing animals is very famous.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Hahaha actually I\'ve also thought that maybe you\'d laugh in this question because you really are a cat lover. =) Anyway, thanks for doing your homework.

- Blair


I love my cat and I also like street cats. I always carry a little bottle which is full of cat\'s feed and whenever I saw a street cat, I give it to the cat.
If I saw a person who bully a cat, I will contact a police officer and report as animal abuse. If I can make a law, I want to make the people who kick a cat go to jail because I think they can do same thing to other people. The fact that many murderer start killing animals is very famous.


I love my cat and I also like street cats, / I am a cat lover. I always carry a bottle full of cat\'s food and whenever I see street cats, I feed them.

If I see a person who bully a cat, I will contact a police officer and report it as animal abuse. If I can make a law, I want people who do this, go to jail because I think they can do the same thing even to people. The fact that a lot of criminals kill animals is already rampant.

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