2. 7. Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Hahaha actually I\'ve also thought that maybe you\'d laugh in this question because you really are a cat lover. =) Anyway, thanks for doing your homework.
- Blair
I love my cat and I also like street cats. I always carry a little bottle which is full of cat\'s feed and whenever I saw a street cat, I give it to the cat.
If I saw a person who bully a cat, I will contact a police officer and report as animal abuse. If I can make a law, I want to make the people who kick a cat go to jail because I think they can do same thing to other people. The fact that many murderer start killing animals is very famous.
I love my cat and I also like street cats, / I am a cat lover. I always carry a bottle full of cat\'s food and whenever I see street cats, I feed them.
If I see a person who bully a cat, I will contact a police officer and report it as animal abuse. If I can make a law, I want people who do this, go to jail because I think they can do the same thing even to people. The fact that a lot of criminals kill animals is already rampant.
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