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The big difference between an ambition and a dream is the target.

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 I think that the target of ambition is usually me.

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 We have an ambition for me such as better honor or money.

>> We have an ambition for ourselves such as better honor or money.
 However, the target of dream is usually others.

>>However, the aim of a dream is usually for others.
 The target can be usually family or public society or poor people.

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 For example, if I want to earn a lot of money from research, it is an ambition.

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 But, if I want to be a researcher to help this human being and improve world technology, it is a dream.

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 I think the greatest life that when I follow a dream, money and happiness follow me naturally.

>>I think the greatest in life is when I follow a dream, money and happiness follow me naturally.
 At that time, the dream covers the ambition.

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 Ambition and a dream give happiness and a sense of achievement and reward.

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 But, the emotion from ambition is relatively short and it can remove anytime.

>>But, the emotion from ambition is relatively short and it can vanish at anytime.
 The emotion from a dream is relatively long and it is spread to others.

>>The emotion from a dream relatively lasts longer and it is spread to others.
 I hope to follow my dream, not ambition.

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 My one dream is to establish the elderly school and educate elders free of charge.

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