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2017-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

Do you think about dying? Are you afraid? I am afraid of dying. When I was young, I didn't like my life so I wanted to die early because my mother was very poor. However, I want to be happy to come many years with my family. When I was young, I had to see my parent's die. It was very terrible in my life. Death is end. There are nothing. So, we have to live very hard in our life.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ms. [이름]!
You maybe right. Death is tarrying for most people. If possible, they\'d like to extend their lives. Who knows in the future, this will be possible.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Do you think about dying? Are you afraid?
>> correct!
I am afraid of dying.
>> correct!
When I was young, I didn\'t like my life so I wanted to die early because my mother was very poor.
>> correct!
However, I want to be happy to come many years with my family.
>> However, I want to be happy in the coming years with my family.
When I was young, I had to see my parent\'s die.
>> correct!
It was very terrible in my life.
>> It was a very terrible time in my life.
Death is end.
>> Death is the end.
There are nothing.
>> There is nothing.
So, we have to live very hard in our life.
>> So, we have to live very hard while we are alive.

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