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Hi there Ms. [이름]!(\",)

Money, money, money must be funny in the rich man\'s world. Is a line from the song \"Money Money Money\" of Abba. Anyway, we know it\'s important to save for the future but I think it\'s one of the hardest thing to do. It\'s way harder than studying another language.(\",)

Take care!(\",)

~T. Lynn

When I was young, many people could not get what they want because they were poor.

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it was very sad because I know about poor of life.

>> It was very sad because I know about being poor.
 Anyway they could learn very important things.

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 They had to wait for a long time to get what they want until saving money.

>> They had to wait for a long time to get what they want until they save up enough money.
 So they could learn about enjoying of time, saving money and worth of money.

>> So they could learn about enjoying time, saving money and the worth of money.
 However nowadays many children do not know saving money because they can get everyday what they want because of their parents.

>>  However nowadays many children do not know about saving money because they can get every thing they want from their parents.
 I know .. all the problems are because of their parents.

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 So I often talk about the value of money to my children.

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