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2017-05-04 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

In my case, during weekdays I am a very diligent but during weekend I am a very lazy. I don't do anything on the weekend but next monday I always regret. I should change my life style on the weekend.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [이름]!(\",)

I\'m sure you\'ve been saying to yourself that you should change many times but it\'s hard, right? Anyway, good luck!

Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn

In my case, during weekdays I am a very diligent but during weekend I am a very lazy.

>> In my case, during weekdays I am a very diligent but during the weekend I am very lazy.
 I don\'t do anything on the weekend but next monday I always regret.

>> I don\'t do anything on the weekend but next Monday, I always regret it.
 I should change my life style on the weekend.

>> correct!

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