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Hello, Ms. [이름]!(\",)
That\'s good to know. But Ms. [이름] when you were young and single did it ever cross your mind to marry a foreigner?
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
I know.
>> correct!
In recent years, the number of mixed marriages in Korea has increased due to a lot of the reasons.
>> In recent years, the number of mixed marriages in Korea has increased due to a lot of reasons.
However, foreign women and foreign men feel very lonely despite they have family.
>> However, foreign women and foreign men feel very lonely despite having a family.
Also some Korean people have a prejudice about mixed marriages with family.
>> Also some Korean people have a prejudice about mixed marriages in the family.
However it is changing their mind with young Korea people like me.
>> However many young people like me are changing their minds.
I belive government of President Moon Jae-in.
>> I believe in the government of President Moon Jae-in.
I think many things will be change in my country as soon as possible.
>> I think many things will be changed in my country as soon as possible.
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