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Hi there Ms. [Name]!(\",)

and we continue....

Take care!

~T. Lynn

Not far from the Louvre stands the Centre Pompidou, displaying the largest collection of modern art in Europe.

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Parisians are still debating whether this radical design is the vision of a madman or a genius!
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Nothing says Paris like the Eifel Tower.

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The Iron Lady can be seen from all over the city.

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However, nothing can prepare you for the moment when you first stand at her feet, or the views from the tip that you will hold dear for a lifetime.

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 When you go to the Eifel Tower, please take a good day because if you decide a crowed day, you might stand in a line at least for 6~8 hours.

>> When you go to the Eifel Tower, please take a good day because if you decide to go on a crowded day, you might stand in a line for at least 6~8 hours.

but it is valuable to wait for a long time because seeing all over the city is memorable memory in whole your life.

>> but it is worth the long wait  because sight-seeing all over the city is a valuable memorable memory you will never forget your whole life.