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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]!
You know what, you can still enjoy life even though you are working. Just find happiness and joy in whatever you do. And I think this really works well.
I understand that your family is your top priority, because me too, my family is the love of my life, especially my son. So let\'s just make the best out of it right? ^^
~Teacher Rain~
Most people are working for peanuts despite they don\'t like their job.
>> CORRECT
Most parents have to work for our family.
>> Most parents have to work for their family.
They feel working is not enjoy doing.
>> They think that working is not enjoyable.
However, nowadays many young people enjoy their life.
>> CORRECT
We called them \"YOLO\" which means \"You Only Live Once\".
>> CORRECT
I envy them, I want to be like them but I can\'t do it.
>> CORRECT
It is very difficult because I love my family and my life\'s first is my family.
>> It is very difficult because I love my family and they are my top priority.
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