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학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, the most happiness is birth of babies.
The most unhappiness is death of babies in the world because of sickness and hunger.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름]!(\",)
I agree with you. The death of an innocent child is always and would always be the saddest thing that could happen I think.
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
In my opinion, the most happiness is birth of babies.
>> In my opinion, the happiest moment in life would be the birth of babies.
The most unhappiness is death of babies in the world because of sickness and hunger.
>> The saddest would be the death of babies in the world because of sickness and hunger.
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