2-7th Homework

2016-06-07 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I think it depends on what's the relation. If the relation is related with the money, the productivity has to be higher. If it is only the help, its productivity may be lower than before. The productivity is to do something in effectiveness and in very short time. The company wants to devote in the task with a very short time and a small power and wants to get the best product. The company said it was the high productivity. I also agree with it. Anyway, the productivity is the result of doing something whether it is the demands of others or not. When I work, I firstly think about the result and how to fast and how to do effectively. It is also the productivity. We want to do fast without any errors, therefore, we set up the schedule for the tasks even if the task is only own. Moreover, when we get the money for the task, we have to think about the productivity more and more. It's because it is a contract, the contract is also the confidence. The productivity is always important.

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Hi, [이름]! Thank you for answering your homework and sharing your opinion regarding this matter. I agree that productivity is important especially at work. When you are productive, it means you are effective in what you do and you have the capacity to finish the task at hand. When we get the result we want and get compensated for it, we tend to work harder to be more productive. That is why companies value people who are productive. It\'s because they know that these people would help them save time, money and effort. These people would also help them get the results that they want. Anyhow, I hope you are being productive today. Stay happy and safe. See you on Thursday. ~Teacher C[이름] ^^ I think it depends on what\'s the relation. >> I think it depends on the relationship. If the relation is related with the money, the productivity has to be higher. >> If the relationship is related with money, the productivity has to be higher. If it is only the help, its productivity may be lower than before. >> If it is only for help, the productivity may be lower than before. The productivity is to do something in effectiveness and in very short time. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Productivity means to do something effectively and in very short time. The company wants to devote in the task with a very short time and a small power and wants to get the best product. >> A company wants to devote in a task with a very short time, limited man-power and wants to get the best product. The company said it was the high productivity. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: The company wants to have high productivity. I also agree with it. >> CORRECT! OR >> I also agree with this opinion. Anyway, the productivity is the result of doing something whether it is the demands of others or not. >> Anyway, productivity is the result of doing something whether it is the demands of others or not. When I work, I firstly think about the result and how to fast and how to do effectively. >> When I work, I firstly think about the result, how fast it would be accomplished and how to do it effectively. It is also the productivity. >> It is also related to productivity. We want to do fast without any errors, therefore, we set up the schedule for the tasks even if the task is only own. >> We want to do things fast without any errors. Therefore, we set up the schedule for the tasks even if the task is only one. Moreover, when we get the money for the task, we have to think about the productivity more and more. >> CORRECT! OR >> In addition to that, when we get the money for the task, we have to think about the productivity a lot more. It\'s because it is a contract, the contract is also the confidence. >> It\'s because it is a contract. The contract signifies confidence. The productivity is always important. >> CORRECT! OR >> The productivity at work is always significant.

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