2/8 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s quite important for me.
Actually I didn\'t like a book.
But recent I\'m formed interested in philosophy.
I reading a book about philosophy. so I like a book and enjoy that time.
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름] [이름]!
A habit of reading builds our knowledge and contributes to intelligence. For many people, reading books is a stress relief exercise and an escape to a different world they can enjoy. For kids, books build language skills and imagination.
- Kristine ^^
It\'s quite important for me.
>> Correct.
Or >> It\'s very significant to me.
Actually I didn\'t like a book.
Actually I didn\'t like a book.
>> I actually dislike books.
But recent I\'m formed interested in philosophy.
But recent I\'m formed interested in philosophy.
>> But recently I\'m interested in philosophy.
I reading a book about philosophy.
I reading a book about philosophy.
>> I\'m reading philosophy books.
so I like a book and enjoy that time.
>> I enjoy reading books.
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