2/8 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your ideal vacation?
<My answer>
My ideal vacation is swiming in the ocean.
Because, I like to go to the ocean.
Second, I also can see the beutiful view at the beach.
Finally, I like swiming.
So, My ideal vacation is swiming in the ocean.
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Teacher Glenda
What is your ideal vacation?
< My answer>
My ideal vacation is swiming in the ocean.
Because, I like to go to the ocean.
Second, I also can see the beutiful [beautiful] view at the beach.
Finally, I like swiming.
So, My ideal vacation is swiming in the ocean.
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