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학생이 쓴 원문
You should find what do you really want through a lot of experience.
Even if you don’t have a dream right now, do not be disappointed and frustrated.
I really understand what's your feeling and situation, because I did feel the same when I was a freshman.
But I could find a dream through many experiences.
Now because of my dream I am happy day by day.
My life motto is “Every single experience will make me a better person’
I made this motto myself so whenever I feel difficult or have a hard time,
강사 첨삭
That's a great motto you have there. I completely agree with you about that. There is absolutely nothing that could replace the knowledge we earn from our experiences. ^^
You should find what do you really want through a lot of experience.>>You should find what you really want through your experiences.Even if you don’t have a dream right now, do not be disappointed and frustrated.>>Correct!I really understand what's your feeling and situation, because I did feel the same when I was a freshman.>>I really understand what your feeling at this situation, because I felt the same when I was a freshman.But I could find a dream through many experiences.
>>I knew that I could find my dreams through my experiences.Now because of my dream I am happy day by day.>>Correct!My life motto is “Every single experience will make me a better person’>>Correct!I made this motto myself so whenever I feel difficult or have a hard time,
>>I made this motto myself so whenever I feel that I'm having a difficulty time,
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