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My eldest daughter will be a high school student next year.
So she applied for admission to the school last monday.
She alsl wants to live in a dormitory but it is not easy.
If she can't live in a dormitory, she and I maybe are very upset.
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My eldest daughter will be a high school student next year.
>> Correct
So she applied for admission to the school last monday. (Monday)
>>Correct
She alsl (also) wants to live in a dormitory but it is not easy.
>> Correct
If she can\'t live in a dormitory, she and I maybe are very upset.
>> If she can\'t live in a dormitory, she and I will be very upset.
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