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Actually, I’d like to be a flight attendant.
Since my major is Horticulture, most people asked me “Why do you want to be a flight attendant in spite of your major?"
I could learn through my major experience so I used to answer them by saying, "While I'm studying I have learned to be affectionate and warm-hearted person because we learned how to love and take care of plants. I personally think that plants are the same as humans since plants can’t live and grow without concern, care or love."
And I worked as an English academy teacher.
Honestly, at this moment I could not speak in English at all.
As a teacher I had to study more in English for them as well as me.
In addition, Despite of my bad english skills I tried to have a close relationship with foreign friend. From that on, I eventually improved my speaking skills and learned how to deal with other people. Teaching was a rewarding job because I've got experience as much as I gave.
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Keep up the great work.^^
Actually, I\'d like to be a flight attendant.
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Since my major is Horticulture, most people asked me \'Why do you want to be a flight attendant in spite of your major?\'
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I could learn through my major experience so I used to answer them by saying, \"While I\'m studying I have learned to be affectionate and warm-hearted person because we learned how to love and take care of plants. I personally think that plants are the same as humans since plants can't live and grow without concern, care or love.\"
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And I worked as an English academy teacher.
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Honestly, at this moment I could not speak in English at all.
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As a teacher I had to study more in English for them as well as me.
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In addition, Despite of my bad english skills I tried to have a close relationship with foreign friend.
>> In addition, despite of my bad English skills I tried to have a close relationship with foreign friend. (Capitalization)
From that on, I eventually improved my speaking skills and learned how to deal with other people.
>> From then on, I eventually improved my speaking skills and learned how to deal with other people.
Teaching was a rewarding job because I\'ve got experience as much as I gave.
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