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2019-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

These days I have a lot of stress because of my team leader. I hate him but I can\'t do anything. I have to work for 10 years because of my children any my future. So I am sad because of my situation.

강사 첨삭

I hope that your team leader will soon realize how important it is to listen to your opinion.

It\'s unfortunate, that there are people who because of position don\'t know how to listen and consider

other employee\'s opinions. I just hope that you can extend more patience towards him. :)


These days I have a lot of stress because of my team leader.

>> Correct

or

>>> These days, I\'m o stressed because of my team leader.
 I hate him but I can\'t do anything.

>> Correct

or

>> I dislike him however, I can\'t do anything.
 I have to work for 10 years because of my children any my future.

>> I have been working for 10 years because of my children and our future.
 So I am sad because of my situation.

>> Correct

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