2-8th Homework

2016-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

All of things in the world change. It is true. The changes is very normal and natural. Even if we disagree with that, the changes keep going on. Therefore, I think if we meet the changes in our life or our circumstance, we have to adapt for me. We often catch up with old things to keep our positions, however, this is difficult to keep on if the flow of changes is the main stream. Of course, we could not easily make a decision whether the changes become a normal things or not in the future. The notice point in this theme is the carefulness. The carefulness is always needed to do something. In this case, we need the carefulness so that we have to easily adapt and don't go through the difficulty. And it is a good behavior for you to keep your awareness on the circumstances. When you catch a certain change, your awareness is very helpful to make a decision. It's because you catch up with the flow of the changes. But it is also very stressful. Many peoples want to live freely.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! ^^ How\'s your day going so far? Thank you for doing your homework and sharing your opinion. I totally agree with you when you said all things in this world change. Nothing stays permanent and being consistent is not a very good thing. They say that change is the only permanent thing in this world. And your ability to adapt would determine your survival. The world is a harsh place and only the fittest and those who are good at adapting to change would most likely survive. People who are resistant to change are similar to a flat tire. A vehicle will not run and will never get to its next destination with a flat tire. A person who is resistant to change and choose to be consistent won\'t be able to move on and grow. I hope you\'re having a great day. See you on Tuesday. ~Teacher C[이름] (^^,) All of things in the world change. >> All of the things in the world change. It is true. >> CORRECT! OR >> It is the truth. The changes is very normal and natural. >> The changes are very normal and natural. Even if we disagree with that, the changes keep going on. >> Even if we disagree with that, the changes will keep going on. Therefore, I think if we meet the changes in our life or our circumstance, we have to adapt for me. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Therefore, I think we have to adopt and meet the changes in our life or our circumstances. We often catch up with old things to keep our positions, however, this is difficult to keep on if the flow of changes is the main stream. >> We often catch up with old things to keep our positions, however, this is difficult to keep if the flow of changes is the main stream. Of course, we could not easily make a decision whether the changes become a normal things or not in the future. >> Of course, we could not easily make a decision whether the changes will become normal things or not in the future. The notice point in this theme is the carefulness. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: The main point in this theme is carefulness. The carefulness is always needed to do something. >> CORRECT! OR >> Being careful is always needed when doing something. In this case, we need the carefulness so that we have to easily adapt and don\'t go through the difficulty. >> In this case, we need carefulness so that we could easily adapt and don\'t go through difficulties. And it is a good behavior for you to keep your awareness on the circumstances. >> CORRECT! OR >> In addition to that, it is a good behavior for you to keep your awareness on the circumstances at hand. When you catch a certain change, your awareness is very helpful to make a decision. >> CORRECT! OR >> When you catch a certain change, your awareness is very helpful in making a decision. It\'s because you catch up with the flow of the changes. >> CORRECT! OR >> It\'s because you can easily catch up with the flow of the changes. But it is also very stressful. >> CORRECT! OR >> However, it is also very stressful. Many peoples want to live freely. >> Many people want to live freely.

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