2.9 Homework

2015-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good morning! Is there perfect equality in your country? No. I think that there is an inequality in Korea. It tend to be considering differences between the rich and the poor, and it seems to be in existence a discrimination of men and wemen in Korea. I think that it is unacceptable and it needs to be changed. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Mr. [이름]! Thank you for sending this in. I think that inequality exists everywhere. I also hope that it can still be changed. Have a great day! ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! >> Correct.Is there perfect equality in your country?No. I think that there is an inequality in Korea. >> Correct.  It tend to be considering differences between the rich and the poor, and it seems to be in existence a discrimination of men and wemen in Korea. >> There is a gap between the rich and the poor as well as discrimination among Korean men and women. I think that it is unacceptable and it needs to be changed.>> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·