2. 9 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
The days we study through only papers passed away. Thesedays are smart era. We can search every kind of information in the internet using a smart phone. Smart era affects education a lot. First, Students can use a tablet instead of a paper book. They can search every information about class contents. Second, Students can communicate with students of other country through webcam. They can feel the nassasity of English to communicate with global people. I also search the internet through my smart phone when I hear a lesson and I wonder something. I don\'t think technology makes education hurt.
The days we only study through papers passed away. These days are smart era. We can search every information on the internet using smart phones, computer, and laptop. Smart era affects education a lot. First, students can use tablet instead of a paper book. They can search and gain more knowledge most especially on their class contents. Second, students can communicate to other fellows abroad through webcams. They can feel the necessity of English to communicate with people globally. In my case, I also search for something that makes me curious. I don\'t think technology makes education hurt, instead it is more advanced and convenient.
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