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2019-06-27 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

Concert staff _HWA RANG DAN Guard Company • Warmly addressed and helped audience and verified tickets checking prohibited items. • Took the initiative and sold goods and operated the storage actively. ◌ Assistant teacher _YBM PSA (Feb-Jun.2015) • Ensured the safety and comfort of children in a bus and classrooms • Cooperate with foreign teachers and a homeroom teacher. (volunteer work) Helper for the elderly _KANGDONG Seniors welfare center • Served meals and distributed supply of food. • Treated old people with respect and tried to be decent and hospitable. ◌ Helper for the blind _ SLIOAM Center for the blind ) • Assisted their make-up class and acted as a marathon partner. • Gave a highly personalized service and used clear and exact expression for the blind. • Was selected as one of the exceptional volunteers and got a certificate of appreciation.

강사 첨삭

Concert staff

HWA RANG DAN GUARD COMPANY (July- Dec. 2015)

& #8226; Warmly addressed and helped the audience. Verified tickets, and checked for prohibited items.

& #8226; Took the initiative and sold goods and operated the storage actively.

& #9676; Assistant teacher

YBM PSA (Feb-Jun.2015)

& #8226; Ensured the safety and comfort of children in a bus and in classrooms.

& #8226; Cooperated with foreign teachers and a homeroom teacher.

(volunteer work)
Helper for the elderly

KANGDONG SENIOR\'S WELFARE CENTER

& #8226; Served meals and distributed food supplies.

& #8226; Treated old people with respect and served them decently and in a very hospitable manner.

& #9676; Helper for the blind.

SLIOAM CENTER FOR THE BLIND

& #8226; Assisted their make-up class and acted as a marathon partner.

& #8226; Gave a highly personalized service and used clear and exact expressions for the blind.

& #8226; Was selected as one of the exceptional volunteers and got a certificate of appreciation.

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