2 Day
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Jae Gil!
Hi! Yeah I was waiting for your composition! Hahaha! Well, I understand that it is not that easy to just remember words, the proper grammar and relax especially that I know English is very important to you. I like the way you used expressions such as “green with envy” etc. I hope you’ll also use these vocabularies and expressions in our classes! ^________^
You drink too much coffee, that is not good for you!!!! Kkkkkk! ^^ I like to drink coffee sometimes..I drink once or twice a week. I don’t like Americano or Espresso because they are bitter and too strong. I like coffee mixes such as cappuccino, latte, caramel machiatto, etc.. I usually s[이름]p 7-8 hours everyday. Let’s talk more about this in class. ^^
Jenny
Hi Teacher! Are you ready to look my sentence ? kkkk....
>> Hi Teacher! Are
you ready to look at my sentences?
When speaking English,
I forgot word, grammer, relax mind....
>> When I’m
speaking in English, I forget words, the grammar and to have a relaxed mind.
It's on the tip of my
tongue.
>>Correct.
It's frustrating. T.T
>> Correct.
English is so
difficult....
>>Correct.
I am green with envy
of anyone with good English.
>>Correct.
To me, English is
worth spending my time.
>>Correct.
Everday is difficult
and days fly so fast...
>> Correct.
My boss said to me
"Be creating something from nothing"
>> My boss told me,
“Create something from nothing.”
wow... Awesome
Sentence... but, It is not easily..
>>It is an awesome
sentence but it is not easy.
On a second thought,
it may be possible.
>>Correct.
because... Effort does
not betray me. kkkkk...
>> It’s because “effort”
will not betray me.
But, I am so tired. I
need to s[이름]p.
>>Correct.
Do you like Americano
coffee?
>>Correct.
I drink 4 times.
>>I already drank 4
times.
Today, I have to stay
up all night again....
>> Correct.
How long do you s[이름]p?
>>Correct.
>>How many hours do you s[이름]p?
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