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2010-10-06 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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e-mail : mspa7da @ gmail.com Hi Teacher! Are you ready to look my sentence ? kkkk.... When speaking English, I forgot word, grammer, relax mind.... It's on the tip of my tongue. It's frustrating. T.T English is so difficult.... I am green with envy of anyone with good English. To me, English is worth spending my time. Everday is difficult and Days fly so fast... My boss said to me "Be creating something from nothing" wow... Awesome Sentence... but, It is not easily.. On a second thought, It may be possible. because... Effort does not betray me. kkkkk... but.. I am so tired. I need to s[이름]p. Do you like Americano coffee? I drink 4 times. Today, I have to stay up all night agin.... How long do you s[이름]p?

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Jae Gil!

Hi! Yeah I was waiting for your composition! Hahaha! Well, I understand that it is not that easy to just remember words, the proper grammar and relax especially that I know English is very important to you. I like the way you used expressions such as “green with envy” etc. I hope you’ll also use these vocabularies and expressions in our classes! ^________^

You drink too much coffee, that is not good for you!!!! Kkkkkk! ^^  I like to drink coffee sometimes..I drink once or twice a week. I don’t like Americano or Espresso because they are bitter and too strong. I like coffee mixes such as cappuccino, latte, caramel machiatto, etc.. I usually s[이름]p 7-8 hours everyday. Let’s talk more about this in class. ^^

Jenny

Hi Teacher! Are you ready to look my sentence ? kkkk....

>> Hi Teacher! Are you ready to look at my sentences?
When speaking English, I forgot word, grammer, relax mind....

>> When I’m speaking in English, I forget words, the grammar and to have a relaxed mind.
It's on the tip of my tongue.

>>Correct.

It's frustrating. T.T

>> Correct.
English is so difficult....

>>Correct.
I am green with envy of anyone with good English.

>>Correct.
To me, English is worth spending my time.
>>Correct.
Everday is difficult and days fly so fast...

>> Correct.
My boss said to me "Be creating something from nothing"

>> My boss told me, “Create something from nothing.”
wow... Awesome Sentence... but, It is not easily..

>>It is an awesome sentence but it is not easy.
On a second thought, it may be possible.

>>Correct.
because... Effort does not betray me. kkkkk...

>> It’s because “effort” will not betray me.
But, I am so tired. I need to s[이름]p.

>>Correct.
Do you like Americano coffee?

>>Correct.

I drink 4 times.

>>I already drank 4 times.
Today, I have to stay up all night again....

>> Correct.
How long do you s[이름]p?

>>Correct.

>>How many hours do you s[이름]p?

 

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