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2019-08-15 · 첨삭 강사 Joylin

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ESSAY: What Independence Day? Explain. I think that\'s when the Korea is out to the Japan. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 7. How do you feel about hanging out with foreigners? I didn\'t meet any foreigners. 8. How different are you from the foreigners you\'ve met? I think they and me are the same. What are other answers to this question?

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
Happy Independence Day.
Enjoy your time.
Here are my corrections.
I think that\'s when the Korea is out to the Japan.
>> I think that\'s when Korea was liberated from Japanese colonization.
I didn\'t meet any foreigners.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I have never met any foreigners.
I think they and me are the same.
>> I think we are the same.

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