2 Homeworks (2)
학생이 쓴 원문
BONUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Answer the Question.
What makes you happy?
Win the game is make me happy.
What are other answers to this question?
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(S for six, N for nine.)
N. When do you ask for forgiveness?
I ask for forgiveness when I made someone angry.
What are other answers to this question?
10. How can you be careful with your words and actions?
I don\'t do that actions or words make someone angry.
What are other answers to this question?
강사 첨삭
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When do you ask for forgiveness?
I ask for forgiveness when I made someone angry.
~Teacher Sheila
Win the game is make me happy.
>>Winning the games makes me happy.
>>Winning the games makes me happy.
OR>>What makes me happy is when I win a game.
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When do you ask for forgiveness?
I ask for forgiveness when I made someone angry.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I ask for forgiveness when I made someone upset.
OR>>I ask for forgiveness when I did something wrong to someone.
I don\'t do that actions or words make someone angry.
>>I don\'t do the actions or words that make someone angry.
I don\'t do that actions or words make someone angry.
>>I don\'t do the actions or words that make someone angry.
OR>>I don\'t say words that could make someone upset.
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