2. Key structure to incease Sales revenue.
학생이 쓴 원문
Our net income of last year was (-) four million five hundred thousand dollar. Forecasted Net income of this year is (-) five million dollar. I think CNE sales revenue should increase to achive (+) net income quickly. Example, Joongang M&B publishing revenue is increasing continually by Runnung gurantee. If we expand the contract as like this contract, there's a chance that revenue will be increasing. As i know, CNE manager was hired last week.
We will proceed the paper work within this week.
강사 첨삭
Here are more Ma'am [이름].
-T. Dona-
Our net income of last year was (-) four million five hundred thousand dollar.
>> Our net income last year was negative 4,500,000 dollars.
Forecasted Net income of this year is (-) five million dollar.
>> Forecast Net Income for this year is negative 5 million dollars.
I think CNE sales revenue should increase to achive (+) net income quickly.
>> I think CNE sales revenue should increase to achieve a positive net income quickly.
Example, Joongang M&B publishing revenue is increasing continually by Runnung gurantee.
>> Correct!
If we expand the contract as like this contract, there's a chance that revenue will be increasing.
>> If we expand the contract as like this contract, there's a chance that that revenue will be increasing.
As i know, CNE manager was hired last week.
>> As I know, CNE manager was hired last week.We will proceed the paper work within this week.
>> Correct!
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