2 situations that make me angry

2021-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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I will write about 2 situations that make me angry. First, When people late, that make me angry. Because I don\'t like a person who don\'t care about our trust. When this situation happens, I\'m trying to talk with them. Then I\'ll tell like \"Don\'t be late. Because this is our trust.\" Second, When people rude to someone, that make me angry. Because I don\'t like a person who don\'t care about other person\'s feeling. When this situation happens, I\'m trying to tell him/her like \"Put yourself in someone else\'s shoes.\"

강사 첨삭

These situations are very crucial, and you definitely had the right to be angry.
Thank you for opening up about your personal experiences. ^^

~t. Ally

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First, When people late, that make me angry. Because I don\'t like a person who don\'t care about our trust. When this situation happens, I\'m trying to talk with them. Then I\'ll tell like \"Don\'t be late. Because this is our trust.\"
Second, When people rude to someone, that make me angry. Because I don\'t like a person who don\'t care about other person\'s feeling. When this situation happens, I\'m trying to tell him/her like \"Put yourself in someone else\'s shoes.\"
>> First, when people are late, it makes me angry. Because I don\'t like a person who doesn\'t care about time and trust. When this situation happens, I try to talk to them. I\'ll say something like, \"Don\'t be late. Because I trust you to be on time.\"
Second, When people are rude to someone, that also makes me angry. Because I don\'t like a person who doesn\'t care about another person\'s feelings. When this situation happens, I try to tell him/her to put themselves in someone else\'s shoes.

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