2.What did you do last weekend? What will you do this weekend? Do you have any specific plans?

2024-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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Last weekend, i did nothing most of the time. I looked for some part time job and applied with my phone but none of them accepted. Also, I played with my dog and read some book. This weekend, I don\'t have any specific plan but I\'m thinking of traveling myself(to anywhere in my country).

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] [이름]!
Thank you for soing your homework!
What matters most on weekend is you don;t do the same thing on the weekdays. that makes it special :)
Great day ahead.
T. Aki~

Last weekend, I did nothing most of the time
>> CORRECT!

I looked for some part time job and applied with my phone but none of them accepted.
>>> I looked for some part-time job and applied online but none of them responded yet.

Also, I played with my dog and read some book.
 >>> I also played with my dog and read some books.

This weekend, I don\'t have any specific plan but I\'m thinking of traveling myself (to anywhere in my country)
>>> CORRECT!

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