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When I was young, many businesses of Korea built their new factory in Korea and they hired employees in Korea. Many Korean people could have their job. However nowadays many businesses of Korea are building their new factory in foreign country. Government of Korea is asking many businesses to build their new factory in Korea for Korea's future. Hiring employees in Korea is very important for Korea's development.

Hi [이름] -   Thank you for doing the homework again. It is always nice to hear your ideas. I also agree with what you are trying to say. I hope that you are having a great time!   = Teacher Bella =     When I was young, many businesses of Korea built their new factory in Korea and they hired employees in Korea. >> When I was young, many businesses were built especially factory companies in Korea where they hire people from here too.   Many Korean people could have their job. >> Many Koreans got their own jobs then. However nowadays many businesses of Korea are building their new factory in foreign country. >> However, nowadays, many businesses from Korea were transferred to foreign countries.   Government of Korea is asking many businesses to build their new factory in Korea for Korea\'s future. >> The government of Korea even plead for these businesses to stay for Korea\'s future. Hiring employees in Korea is very important for Korea\'s development. >> Correct!