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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, this is [이름].
Do you have a minute?
I had an enjoyable time thanks to you.
However, something terrible happened.
I would like to talk to you about your CD.
I borrowed it from you last week.
Before I tell you about it, I'd like to apologize.
I lost your CD because I lost my bag.
Your CD was inside my bag.
I think that it was stolen by someone.
I will buy a new CD for you this weekend.
I know you feel upset now.
I am so sorry.
After I buy it, I will visit your house.
See you later.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
This looks familiar. Well done. Keep it up!
Teacher Venus^^
Hi, this is [이름].
>>>CORRECT
Do you have a minute?
>>>CORRECT
I had an enjoyable time thanks to you.
>>>CORRECT
However, something terrible happened.>>>CORRECT
I would like to talk to you about your CD.
>>>CORRECT
I borrowed it from you last week.
>>>CORRECT
Before I tell you about it, I\'d like to apologize.
>>>CORRECT
I lost your CD because I lost my bag.
>>>CORRECT
Your CD was inside my bag.
>>>CORRECT
I think that it was stolen by someone.
>>>CORRECT
I will buy a new CD for you this weekend.
>>>CORRECT
I know you feel upset now.
>>>CORRECT
I am so sorry.
>>>CORRECT
After I buy it, I will visit your house.
>>>CORRECT
See you later.
>>>CORRECT
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