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2015-09-16 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, this is [이름]. Do you have a minute? I had an enjoyable time thanks to you. However, something terrible happened. I would like to talk to you about your CD. I borrowed it from you last week. Before I tell you about it, I'd like to apologize. I lost your CD because I lost my bag. Your CD was inside my bag. I think that it was stolen by someone. I will buy a new CD for you this weekend. I know you feel upset now. I am so sorry. After I buy it, I will visit your house. See you later.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   This looks familiar. Well done. Keep it up!   Teacher Venus^^   Hi, this is [이름]. >>>CORRECT Do you have a minute? >>>CORRECT I had an enjoyable time thanks to you. >>>CORRECT However, something terrible happened.>>>CORRECT   I would like to talk to you about your CD. >>>CORRECT I borrowed it from you last week. >>>CORRECT Before I tell you about it, I\'d like to apologize. >>>CORRECT I lost your CD because I lost my bag. >>>CORRECT Your CD was inside my bag. >>>CORRECT I think that it was stolen by someone. >>>CORRECT I will buy a new CD for you this weekend. >>>CORRECT I know you feel upset now. >>>CORRECT I am so sorry. >>>CORRECT After I buy it, I will visit your house. >>>CORRECT See you later. >>>CORRECT

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