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2016-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi this is [이름]. I waited for a long time for tomorrow. I like shopping with you. Before I go to the department with you, I am wondering about something. So I have some questions. Do you like shopping with me? If you don't want it, you can tell me. Do you have a discount coupon? I have some discount coupons. If you want it, I can give you it. When will we meet tomorrow? I want to meet early. I hope we will have an enjoyable time.

강사 첨삭

    Hello [이름]!   You are really improving. I came across this website about sentence patterns. Check this out: http://www.academia.edu/4757907/English_Sentence_Pattern   Teacher Venus^^   Hi this is [이름]. >>>CORRECT I waited for a long time for tomorrow. >>>I\'ve been waiting for a long time for our shopping tomorrow. I like shopping with you. >>>CORRECT Before I go to the department with you, I am wondering about something.>>>Before I go to the department with you, I want to ask you something.   So I have some questions. >>>CORRECT Do you like shopping with me? >>>CORRECT If you don\'t want it, you can tell me. >>>CORRECT Do you have a discount coupon? >>>CORRECT I have some discount coupons. >>>CORRECT If you want it, I can give you it. >>>If you want it, I can give it to you. When will we meet tomorrow? >>>CORRECT I want to meet early. >>>CORRECT I hope we will have an enjoyable time. >>>CORRECT

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