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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi this is [이름].
I waited for a long time for tomorrow.
I like shopping with you.
Before I go to the department with you, I am wondering about something.
So I have some questions.
Do you like shopping with me?
If you don't want it, you can tell me.
Do you have a discount coupon?
I have some discount coupons.
If you want it, I can give you it.
When will we meet tomorrow?
I want to meet early.
I hope we will have an enjoyable time.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You are really improving. I came across this website about sentence patterns. Check this out:
http://www.academia.edu/4757907/English_Sentence_Pattern
Teacher Venus^^
Hi this is [이름].
>>>CORRECT
I waited for a long time for tomorrow.
>>>I\'ve been waiting for a long time for our shopping tomorrow.
I like shopping with you.
>>>CORRECT
Before I go to the department with you, I am wondering about something.>>>Before I go to the department with you, I want to ask you something.
So I have some questions.
>>>CORRECT
Do you like shopping with me?
>>>CORRECT
If you don\'t want it, you can tell me.
>>>CORRECT
Do you have a discount coupon?
>>>CORRECT
I have some discount coupons.
>>>CORRECT
If you want it, I can give you it.
>>>If you want it, I can give it to you.
When will we meet tomorrow?
>>>CORRECT
I want to meet early.
>>>CORRECT
I hope we will have an enjoyable time.
>>>CORRECT
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